One night in the dungeon, there were three Slytherins who found themselves very bored. So, all of them tried to come up with different ideas to make their night very interesting, fun, and exciting.
“Hey we could go make of the new first year Hufflepuffs” suggested Fayeth
“Hey no fair we are first years” Adam and Meg both said at the same time with a bit of anger.
“Oh yeah thats right” replied Fayeth in a guilty type voice.
“ How about we finish our Herbology homework?” said Meg in a quiet tone.
“ No, we have two weeks to complete it” said Adam
Then, after thinking for about 5 more minutes and looking at each other with blank faces someone had gotten a rather interesting idea.
“How about we go to Hogmeade, I heard they have this awesome new shoe store and also they just built that new coffee shop” said Adam
“Dude, the new shoe store has some awesome stuff, I mean some must buy type items I love it!” said Fayeth
“Isn't it after curfew” said Meg
“Meg live a little nothing terrible could happen I mean it is only a little shopping and a few cups of coffee whats the worst that could happen?” said Adam
“Yeah your right, I don't know why I'm thinking too much about it” Meg said in a low tone.
So, then everyone got dressed, and when I say got dressed I mean they dressed to impress. Adam wore some black jeans that fit him quite well, some green and black checkered Vans, a pair of green Kanye West glasses, and a black T-shirt that had the words Slytherins Rule written in green letters. Fayeth wore a nice blue evening dress, a pair of black flats, and a nice black half jacket. Meg went out in style she wore a nice forest green skirt, black sandal like heels, and a very nice T-shirt. Once everyone was done getting ready and looking nice they all headed to Hogsmeade for the best night of the year.
Soon after they arrived in Hogsmeade all eyes were on them. People stopped what they were doing just too look at them. They were all looking like beautiful deities. Witches and Wizards of all ages smiled when they rested their eyes on the fabulous looking slytherin students. They were all simply remarkable, they all walked like they were professional models on the worlds greatest catwalk.
They soon arrived at the new phenomenal shoe store, and Fayeths face lit up with glee. She produced a smile that kids have when they walk in a toy store. After, looking around for a bit they heard a very familiar voice. The voice was soft but very mature the three students heard the voice before but they couldn't think of who it was. Then Meg thought, and then changed her facial expression like she had just seen a ghost.
Fayeth and Adam tried to ask Meg what was wrong but she started to stutter.
Then after stuttering for about 30 seconds she finally got the strength and her speech back to say what she needed to say. The person who owns that voice is none other then Missa Matz. Then Adam looked at Fayeth with a confused face and bluttered out.
“Who is Missa Matz? Is she a new student?'
Next both, Fayeth and Meg looked at Adam and said
“Who is Missa Matz?..Dude she is like the History of Magic, and the Quidditch teacher, and not only that she is the Head of House for Gryffindor. Then after hearing the information that was told to him Adam then turned a little pale, and started to whine and cry about how they were going to get detention and get major house points deducted. Next Fayeth took Adam and cautiously told him.
“Look, you are a dude, well at least I think you are, so do not start crying before us girls, and second she isn't that terrible but she surely can not catch us here so we must hurry and get out of hear before we do get in some serious trouble.”
So, then the three students sneakily got out of the shoe store and headed back to school. On their way back to school a very interesting thing happened, a guy grabbed Meg by the arm and try to get her number, but Meg was so not interested so she tried to release herself. The guy didn't allow her to get away so Adam ran back and slapped the guy and then grabbed Meg's arm and they both caught up with Fayeth and all three students made it back to school in so they thought.
The next morning they got up got dressed in their robes,and went to sit with their other classmates for breakfast, but before they could sit down Missa Matz sent a 6th year Gryffindor to come tell the students to meet her in her office in 5 minutes. All three students looked at each other, then headed towards Professors Matz office. Once they got their they all walked in with their heads down and sat in the empty seats.
Missa told the students that she had in fact saw them in the shoe store in hogsmeade after curfew and since they broke curfew and went out without permission their punishment was that they had to scrub her classrooms floor everyday after her last class left. So, then after Missa was finished talking to them they all walked out with a sort of sad look on their face.
“See Meg I told you we shouldn't have left but no you just had to go” stated Adam in a furious tone.
“Yeah Meg next time do not get us involved, now because of you we have to scrub floors, I mean gosh Meg Hogsmeade was so not worth it.” replied Fayeth in a angry type of tone.
“But...but...I..didn't...” Meg said stuttering.

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Ratings and Comments

#1Kylie Joel Lonerins's AvatarKylie Joel Lonerins (rated this 6)

Hey,i'd like this story..
It's quite nice

I like the end chapter,,haha
Is Meg always hopeless??,,


#2Coryphee Etoile's AvatarCoryphee Etoile (rated this 7)

Needs some editiing, but otherwise, NICE WORK!!! :)

#3Tara Little's AvatarTara Little (rated this 8)

A few typos but I liked it just the same. I think I would sneak out to some place more interesting than a shoe store though.

#4Hailey Dream's AvatarHailey Dream (rated this 7)


#5Amilen Urlen's AvatarAmilen Urlen (rated this 7)

strange writing style, but i liked it

#6Fleur Gayle's AvatarFleur Gayle (rated this 5)

some what good sorry not personal

#7Serenity Thomas's AvatarSerenity Thomas (rated this 7)

Good job!

#8Sam Clause's AvatarSam Clause (rated this 7)

#9Castora Grimsby's AvatarCastora Grimsby (rated this 7)

Very enjoyable! Keep up the good work.

#10Morag McQueen's AvatarMorag McQueen (rated this 5)

Nice story, but it needs a bit more layouting to make it easier to read, and maybe shorter sentences?

#11David Koche's AvatarDavid Koche (rated this 5)

Needs a little editting.

#12Dante Rakim's AvatarDante Rakim (rated this 7)

I liked how you wrote about them sneaking out but I didn't like how they snuck out to look at shoes.

#13Ardeliah Longbottom's AvatarArdeliah Longbottom (rated this 8)

Interesting attempt. It could use a little work with spelling and maybe a proof read or two before posting but other than that I enjoyed it.

#14Stephanus Bully's AvatarStephanus Bully (rated this 7)

#15Cyriel Aurorus's AvatarCyriel Aurorus (rated this 6)

#16Benjamin McDonald's AvatarBenjamin McDonald (rated this 7)

#17Stephen Scofield's AvatarStephen Scofield (rated this 7)

quite good posting. I love how you end the story.

#18Twilight Hodges's AvatarTwilight Hodges (rated this 8)

It needs some little touchups but i love your ending. It fits the situation.

#19Risa Swan's AvatarRisa Swan (rated this 7)

#20Fumei Shirokuro's AvatarFumei Shirokuro (rated this 8)


#21Fhaella Fiedlerson's AvatarFhaella Fiedlerson (rated this 7)

It's OK! There are grammatical errors but still nice.

#22Catriona Watson's AvatarCatriona Watson (rated this 6)

A good effort, keep it up.

#23Ren Lynch's AvatarRen Lynch (rated this 6)

the ending was funny but there was no real adventure

#24Azizah Suli's AvatarAzizah Suli (rated this 7)

there are some spelling mistakes,,

but overall, nice try..

#25Chikara Minamoto's AvatarChikara Minamoto (rated this 8)

#26Myrtle Gomez's AvatarMyrtle Gomez (rated this 5)

it was good,ish.....................

#27Nassa Dikaios's AvatarNassa Dikaios (rated this 5)

Some spelling and grammatical errors. This could use a bit of editing yet, but it was a good try.

#28Alexa Dela Cruz's AvatarAlexa Dela Cruz (rated this 5)

nice try

#29Kristen Yorker's AvatarKristen Yorker (rated this 7)

Good effort :)

#30Abbie Maldonado's AvatarAbbie Maldonado (rated this 7)

It was ok. I think sneaking out for a club/party or meeting famous someone ,ight have been better than for a shoe store

#31India Jolly's AvatarIndia Jolly (rated this 7)

Good try

#32Kath Snape's AvatarKath Snape (rated this 7)

Good effort !! A little crazy how you got caught but it is your story.

#33Annette Picolt's AvatarAnnette Picolt (rated this 7)

Good try :)

#34Mia Vardales's AvatarMia Vardales (rated this 4)

The grammatical and punctuation mistakes are kind of annoying. Also the story is not very original, but it's enjoyable anyway.

#35Gustavo Flores's AvatarGustavo Flores (rated this 9)

Nice!! I loved the ending!

#36Rorey Padfoot's AvatarRorey Padfoot (rated this 6)

You need to edit before posting. Good try

#37Thoth Van's AvatarThoth Van (rated this 7)

#38Bere Lee's AvatarBere Lee (rated this 8)

nice try

#39Jacqualine Snape's AvatarJacqualine Snape (rated this 8)

A good effort, keep trying.

#40Askeron Kyle's AvatarAskeron Kyle (rated this 7)

Very good.

#41Celeste Marivaux's AvatarCeleste Marivaux (rated this 7)

I think the grammatical errors ruin the story a little. Though I did like how they blamed it all on Meg in the end. Great effort and your quite brave, your the first submission, it is always so much harder being the first to submit because you have nothing to go by.

#42Eno Thomas's AvatarEno Thomas (rated this 6)

There are a lot of grammar errors.

#43Ayahzy Nahki's AvatarAyahzy Nahki (rated this 7)

There are a bunch of spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors. Also, the story has a few random parts that don't really make sense.

#44Zoki Phantom's AvatarZoki Phantom (rated this 6)

Well, average. :/

There are some spelling mistakes and you're missing some punctuations too (dots mostly), and I didn't quite like it. I mean, it's not that funny or messy, they just went to the shoe shop and got caught? :P

(And that's not how Fayeyay and Meg would act, btw)

But nice try! :]