This does not seem like an advertisement someone would use. Try using different color fonts and add a image theme, a hand drawn one works just as well as digital images.
I love the eye-catching bright colors; very attention grabbing. Good job!
It contains all the important information and the ad is not too crowded. The graphics are simple but neat :)
Aw it's cute. I like the Paint drawing or something not so complicated. And the colours go well together too!
Very good effort. I like how the bright colours, really eye catching.
I like all the colors used! I'd be sure to visit Dervish and Banges. (I'd be dragging along a first year, of course, and putting all of my supplies in their basket.)
Great use of color! I'll be sure to stop by Dervish and Banges to pick up some items (once I find a First Year to tail *g*)
Good advert, but I have a pet peeve as well with the words being centered. Overall, good advert.