Oh! HOL! HOL!
It's the place where wizards dwell!
We're learning new things every day!
Fun quidditch games you can play!
It's a place you'll want to stay--and never go away!

Read the news in the Great Hall!
Or explore Us'r Profiles Galore!
Write your opinion in the Forums...
You'll never be stuck down in the Doldrums!

IRC, Eowl ne, shop in Hogsmead, or write for the Library!
Prefects, Professors, and students like me...

WE ALL LOVE HOL!

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Ratings and Comments

#1Andrea John's AvatarAndrea John (rated this 10)

Amazing!!!!

#2May Lee's AvatarMay Lee (rated this 7)

This is a good song!

#3Catriona Watson's AvatarCatriona Watson (rated this 5)

#4Dara Muthia's AvatarDara Muthia (rated this 7)

you did it well but I think it must 12 lines
(if I am not wrong)

#5Jinxy Jo's AvatarJinxy Jo (rated this 8)

Very good, I like it :D

#6Maddy Punte's AvatarMaddy Punte (rated this 7)

#7Fernanda Carreón's AvatarFernanda Carreón (rated this 8)

it is really cool and intresting i give it an 8 that it deserves

#8Allison Jameson's AvatarAllison Jameson (rated this 7)

#9Prof. Opal Dragonfly's AvatarProf. Opal Dragonfly (rated this 9)

This is very nice, except for the "ne" instead of "me" (?). But--that certainly could be corrected! There isn't a totally consistent rhyme scheme (Hall, Galore ?) but then there won't be a consistent tune, either!

#10Endang Potter's AvatarEndang Potter (rated this 5)

not too bad

#11Belle Black's AvatarBelle Black (rated this 6)

good attempt- some of the rhymes seem a bit "forced"

#12Scott Novak's AvatarScott Novak (rated this 8)

Very energetic!

#13Bev Grey's AvatarBev Grey (rated this 8)

I think your song is great, love the beginning the best.

#14Daniel Zaz's AvatarDaniel Zaz (rated this 9)

Great but some things are not correct grammer.

#15Iman Usman's AvatarIman Usman (rated this 6)

Not bad, but not special

#16Prof. Charles Pendragon's AvatarProf. Charles Pendragon (rated this 7)

Not bad. It rhymes nicely. :)

#17Josefine Sui's AvatarJosefine Sui (rated this 5)

I quite like it except for the last line.

#18Allison Riddle's AvatarAllison Riddle (rated this 7)

I like this. The third to last line doesn't flow as well as the rest though, and in the seventh line, I'm not sure if "us'r" works. Also, I think "eowl ne" is a typo. Otherwise, good work! (*hums* hol! hol! It's the place where wizards dwell!)

#19Madras Bubbles's AvatarMadras Bubbles (rated this 4)

#20Masha MaIfoy's AvatarMasha MaIfoy (rated this 7)

good.. we all love HOL!!

#21Kath Snape's AvatarKath Snape (rated this 6)

#22Barbara Phoenix's AvatarBarbara Phoenix (rated this 7)

I like it, but the rhythm is a bit hard sometimes (of course I don't know which melody you had in mind while writing it :P )

#23Rorey Padfoot's AvatarRorey Padfoot (rated this 5)

#24Jenna Hathaway's AvatarJenna Hathaway (rated this 6)

#25Ashlee Sully's AvatarAshlee Sully (rated this 8)

Good submission. The only thing I didn't like was the day, play, stay away. For me personally, too much of one rhyme. Otherwise good.

#26Ardeliah Longbottom's AvatarArdeliah Longbottom (rated this 7)

#27Emma Walker's AvatarEmma Walker (rated this 8)

I kind of what to sing it to jingle bells. but I like it

#28Ellie Warhol's AvatarEllie Warhol (rated this 10)

I thought the song was GREAT!!!!

#29Tina Jones's AvatarTina Jones (rated this 4)

#30Jacqualine Snape's AvatarJacqualine Snape (rated this 8)

Good effort, but I wasn't sure if it was meant to rhyme or not.

#31Castora Grimsby's AvatarCastora Grimsby (rated this 8)

Really good song. I can tell you enjoy HOL!

#32Marguerite Davenport's AvatarMarguerite Davenport (rated this 8)

Wonderful I love it

#33Askeron Kyle's AvatarAskeron Kyle (rated this 7)

very nice

#34Daniela Alonso's AvatarDaniela Alonso (rated this 7)

#35Caitlin Hewett's AvatarCaitlin Hewett (rated this 8)

Catchy. I like it.

#36Yavanna Basham's AvatarYavanna Basham (rated this 8)

Very cute,and catchy!

#37Zach Goldenfarb's AvatarZach Goldenfarb (rated this 10)

I loved it.

#38Morag McQueen's AvatarMorag McQueen (rated this 3)

Whilst I like your general idea, I'm a bit sceptical of some of the rhymes and there are words in there that don't make sense. I don't want to be cruel, as I know that English isn't everyone's first language and also that typos do happen, but when submitting something to be voted on, just double check it next time...
I do like how you got everything into the song though :)

#39Lucy Greyback's AvatarLucy Greyback (rated this 7)

Cute ^_^ Nice and you respected the 12 lines requirement XD

#40Noora Novel's AvatarNoora Novel (rated this 4)

A little too rough I think.