It was a quite Januariā€™s day.
I was accepted to join the school and was on my way
but I had no idea I was about to become,
A lion with a new sort of mum.

It was that day I saw,
the great Missa paw.
I was scared I tell you that,
I did not even dare to chat.

The first time I entered the common room.
I could smell a strange sort of perfume,
it was the esteemed air of my head of house.
I immediatley felt like a little mouse.

At first I tended to bow
But when I came to see how
Missa really was, thou
I gave the first idea my greatest no.

No I can only respectfully shout,
And that without any doubt,
MISSA, you blow them all away!
Sorry, this is something I had to say.

But this is not the end,
There are still 2 lines to be spend.
I have to tell it to you all:
Missa is the best HOH in the gryffindor hall !!!

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Ratings and Comments

#1Marguerite Davenport's AvatarMarguerite Davenport (rated this 7)

Quite Lovely. Nicely written. However I think you meant January not Januari. Your poem is full of wonderful Gryffindor love. Great job.

#2Jacqualine Snape's AvatarJacqualine Snape (rated this 8)

well done, I like the way it rhymes.

#3Ardeliah Longbottom's AvatarArdeliah Longbottom (rated this 9)

Brilliant I say, and not just because I agree with the statement that Missa is the best HOH of all.

#4Kath Snape's AvatarKath Snape (rated this 8)

Well done and good thought put into it. Happy your a happy Gryffindor !!!

#5Serenity Thomas's AvatarSerenity Thomas (rated this 8)

Very nice poem! I know it is better then anything I could do, so I give you a lot of credit for that!

#6Bev Grey's AvatarBev Grey (rated this 7)

I think it is very cute, fun to read!

#7Catriona Watson's AvatarCatriona Watson (rated this 8)

And that day is the first day (at Hogwarts) of your life that you will remember forever ....

Well done, very nice poem.

#8Bere Lee's AvatarBere Lee (rated this 8)

nice try, a very cute poem and I know poems are hard to do sometimes.
Im positive though that January's is with a" y" not an "i".

#9Jenna Hathaway's AvatarJenna Hathaway (rated this 7)

Nice effort although some parts don't rhyme that well, but I liked the beginning :)

#10Sam Clause's AvatarSam Clause (rated this 9)

This was a nice poem, I really enjoyed it! This poem is exactly how I felt when I was sorted into Gryffindor!

#11Rose Alstien's AvatarRose Alstien (rated this 8)

I get it! cute poem, and I like that it rhymes.

#12Zoki Phantom's AvatarZoki Phantom (rated this 8)

This was nice. I guess it could have been a bit better at few places, but it was a fun read overall. :)

#13Pheobe Natsen's AvatarPheobe Natsen (rated this 7)

Very good, I like it. I didn't understand some bits, but maybe I'm just a bit of an idiot. Great work!