It is true, specters
have the finest revelries.
Such lengthy bashes,
but every second is pleasant.

The nosh can be
disagreeable with your stomach,
but the company is
diverting with a surplus of motives.

The Fat Friar usually
enjoys a little too much
mulled mead, and the teasing Bloody Baron
helps himself to the contents of 10
firewhiskey bottles.

Even the depressive
Sir Nicolas has a fantastic time
and forgets about the his many denied requests
for one cheerful night.

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Ratings and Comments

#1Sophie Delacour's AvatarSophie Delacour (rated this 8)

I liked it very much, I think you did a great job.

#2Castora Grimsby's AvatarCastora Grimsby (rated this 7)

I think this is nice. I like how you show what each ghost is up to.

#3Isabella Clearwater's AvatarIsabella Clearwater (rated this 7)

Very creative an dI like how you incorpor

#4Abbie Maldonado's AvatarAbbie Maldonado (rated this 1)

sorry

#5Ramona Operandi's AvatarRamona Operandi (rated this 4)

I like it. I mean, I could follow it, and your vocabulary is refreshing.
However, the inconsistancy in the capitalization detracts from the aesthetic appeal. The rhythm and meter were lacking, and not there at all at times, to be frank.
Though there is promise here, the meat is savory. You just need to sharpen your abilities to dress it well.
Pardon my metaphors~

#6Afton Lee's AvatarAfton Lee (rated this 6)

I think it needs a bit of flow to it, perhaps an oucne of rythem.

However, i completley disgaree witht the rude comment below mine.

Other than that, it was a nice poem. Fair play fro giving it a bash!

#7Reecto Potter's AvatarReecto Potter (rated this 8)

nice work . . .

aihhhh . .


no name XD ~

good poems .

#8Benjamin McDonald's AvatarBenjamin McDonald (rated this 8)

#9James Evens's AvatarJames Evens (rated this 6)

Not a sort of rhyming sequence, but good descriptive words.

#10Stephen Scofield's AvatarStephen Scofield (rated this 7)

Nice work.

#11Coryphee Etoile's AvatarCoryphee Etoile (rated this 8)

Well done, but needs to flow

#12Fhaella Fiedlerson's AvatarFhaella Fiedlerson (rated this 6)

#13Rowan Dream's AvatarRowan Dream (rated this 7)

a nice effort but I miss to much to make a good poem

#14Jacqualine Snape's AvatarJacqualine Snape (rated this 7)

A nice effort.

#15Bere Lee's AvatarBere Lee (rated this 8)

nice

#16Jinxy Jo's AvatarJinxy Jo (rated this 9)

It doesn't flow to good but other than that it's a great poem. Really nice :)

#17Bart Cork's AvatarBart Cork (rated this 6)

#18Jenna Hathaway's AvatarJenna Hathaway (rated this 7)

Nice but a bit jumpy in the sense that it doesn't flow well

#19Ellie Peters's AvatarEllie Peters (rated this 6)

not bad. didn't flow quite right in my opinion tho.

#20Noa Green's AvatarNoa Green (rated this 7)

nice effort

#21Ardeliah Longbottom's AvatarArdeliah Longbottom (rated this 9)

I liked. I can't wait to read more. I just hope I can survive reading them all. :D

#22Roxy Simpsons's AvatarRoxy Simpsons (rated this 5)

not bad

#23Luna Jecklewood's AvatarLuna Jecklewood (rated this 5)

#24Jessica Miranda Jodoin's AvatarJessica Miranda Jodoin (rated this 2)

what did that have to do with Deathdays ??
It doesnt flow. at all.
The books say they regretted not dying and you make it sound cheerful I don't like it. no offense

#25Eno Thomas's AvatarEno Thomas (rated this 6)

#26Daniel Zaz's AvatarDaniel Zaz (rated this 6)

It was good but I couldn't catch to rythm.

#27Nina Gav's AvatarNina Gav (rated this 6)

Good.

#28Ellie Warhol's AvatarEllie Warhol (rated this 5)

It does not flow together well, though I like how you were not repetitive.

#29Rose Sutherland's AvatarRose Sutherland (rated this 4)

This was a good try but I don't think it flowed very well. I like the vareity of words though.

#30Aylarah Scale's AvatarAylarah Scale (rated this 7)

#31Catriona Watson's AvatarCatriona Watson (rated this 5)

Good effort.

#32Kath Snape's AvatarKath Snape (rated this 7)

#33Zenix James's AvatarZenix James (rated this 7)

#34Endang Potter's AvatarEndang Potter (rated this 7)

Nice

#35Elyranna Reginhart's AvatarElyranna Reginhart (rated this 7)

#36Ariel Kingston's AvatarAriel Kingston (rated this 7)

not bad

#37Jacob Layog's AvatarJacob Layog (rated this 6)

#38Cam Yousefpour's AvatarCam Yousefpour (rated this 7)

Nice effort

#39Iselilja Mira Mickelsdottir's AvatarIselilja Mira Mickelsdottir (rated this 5)

#40John Martin 's AvatarJohn Martin (rated this 7)

good poem

#41Fern Davant's AvatarFern Davant (rated this 8)

I liked this. Very cute, neat rhythm, and very sweet.

#42Florent Pinku's AvatarFlorent Pinku (rated this 6)

this poem is great

#43Gwen Blacklock's AvatarGwen Blacklock (rated this 6)

#44Fleur Gayle's AvatarFleur Gayle (rated this 8)

nice see the others for more comment

#45Yavanna Basham's AvatarYavanna Basham (rated this 7)

Very cute!

#46Katrina Burke's AvatarKatrina Burke (rated this 7)

I didnt get some of it because of the word content but otherwise it was very good!

#47Holly Muse's AvatarHolly Muse (rated this 7)

it is creative, and i like the language you have used. it doesn't seem to flow smoothly however.

#48Sam Clause's AvatarSam Clause (rated this 7)

I think it is cute

#49Tara Little's AvatarTara Little (rated this 7)

#50Ayahzy Nahki's AvatarAyahzy Nahki (rated this 7)

You certainly had fun with word usage! However, the poem just doesn't flow right. And I'm not sure if ghosts can drink, but I'll give you poetic license.

#51Hailey Dream's AvatarHailey Dream (rated this 6)

#52Amilen Urlen's AvatarAmilen Urlen (rated this 5)

#53Jhon Swits's AvatarJhon Swits (rated this 5)

just average

#54Askeron Kyle's AvatarAskeron Kyle (rated this 6)

Very good.

#55Zoki Phantom's AvatarZoki Phantom (rated this 6)

Weeell, I can't say it COULD have been a very good poem, but somehow the writing doesn't flow.

Nice Try!

#56Tara Aurelium's AvatarTara Aurelium (rated this 5)

That was a kinda poorly written poem, in my opinion. Sorry. :\

#57Azizah Suli's AvatarAzizah Suli (rated this 8)

a very good poem..
i like it..

#58Sarah Evans's AvatarSarah Evans (rated this 8)

Certainly a very well written poem!